The Witness

The Witness 2.5 stars It s fun, it s Peter driving Chris crazy, but for some reason I wasn t fully feeling it. Teen Wolf FanficChris Argent Peter HaleThe Case Against The Crime Boss Deucalion Hinges On The Testimony Of Peter Hale, Who S Been Put Under Hour Protection Chris Argent Is In Charge Of His Security Detail, And If Peter Won T Stop Hitting On Him, He Might Not Live To See The Trial, Words Complete 3.5Teen Wolf Peter Chris AU HumourPeter is driving Chris mad with innuendos and sexual harassment And it s hilarious. 3.5 oh I like me some petopher First off, I d like to say that there nothing wrong with this story so much as it didn t catch my interest the way I expected it to I m not entirely sure why On paper it s something I m interested in intelligent, morally ambiguous character meets honorable and stronger character who is determined to protect him for honorable reasons , but something about how the way it was carried out just fell flat with me Maybe it was that there wasn t enough underlying plot separate from the banter between the two main characters, although I ve encountered character driven, story thin books that have kept me interested before I still liked it, but not as much as I thought I would.That being said, one of my main criticisms of this story is something that occasionally happens with AU fanfiction, which is, How in heaven s name is this Teen Wolf Fanfic at all It was so separated from all the key characteristics of Teen Wolf that I don t even see how it can be said to be a Teen Wolf fanfic No werewolves, no hunters, and, perhaps most importantly, even most of the characters who would normally be main characters either aren t there or are there but feel oddly shoehorned in as if there was a role to play and the best character that fit it was picked rather than the character was allowed to be his or herself This doesn t make the story bad, but if this story had been put forth as an original short story, no one would have ever thought that it had anything to do with Teen Wolf, and it s at that stage where I start questioning whether you would stick the fanfiction label on a work.So, if you re looking for a Teen Wolf fanfiction that has to do with the Teen Wolfverse, you probably won t get your fix here If you re looking for Teen Wolf fanfiction and are willing to just take some of the characters generally Peter and Chris, but also cameo appearances a few I won t mention because they are minor and or would spoil things and lose the the universe flavor, you might enjoy this title If you don t care about Teen Wolf and werewolves and want a cop witness short story, you also might have fun reading this. Fun, liked the pairing but I just didn t feel it Maybe because it was completely AU As for a short story about non TW people, I liked it and would be asking for because the though put into the detailing of the story was really good. Kind of fun and a wee bit smexy. I m already a big fan of KouriArashi, all the because I think her stories just keep getting better This is a tight, well edited story, with an uncommon but cool pairing Peter Hale and Chris Argent It works surprisingly well, the banter and conflict between them both realistic and amusing Extra points for Peter s strategic use of nudity and various levels of undress Hilarious and totally in character And the sex quite nice Definitely Recommend. Petopher is quickly becoming my favorite pairing I m telling you, these guys want us to ship them Google Bohourne or whatever My fangirl mind is pretty much convinced something s going on between these two Something gooooodSo anyway, this was a fun fic It wasn t as intense or in character as I d hoped for, and I think there could ve been done a little with that plot, but it was entertaining nonetheless.

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[Reading] ➷ The Witness  By KouriArashi – Hookupgoldmilf.info
  • ebook
  • 70 pages
  • The Witness
  • KouriArashi
  • English
  • 04 October 2018

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